tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5563759771371058937.post1626243815663164912..comments2011-11-07T05:43:51.026-08:00Comments on THE HANGING NEST: When I askedRajivhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05867052446850053694noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5563759771371058937.post-10607658876427555322010-11-29T18:56:02.774-08:002010-11-29T18:56:02.774-08:00wonderful poem rajiv ji... mind blowing !wonderful poem rajiv ji... mind blowing !अरुण चन्द्र रॉयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01508172003645967041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5563759771371058937.post-37389301250510547932010-11-29T04:30:38.482-08:002010-11-29T04:30:38.482-08:00Dear rajiv sir
this poem may seem quite ordinary f...Dear rajiv sir<br />this poem may seem quite ordinary for a general reader but quite sensible for the people with emotion and sensiblity... it teaches what life is.. what nature is .. what emotion is.... it is quite strange that when I read your english poems I recall Hindi poem and when I read ur hindi poem, I recall lines from English literature.. presently I recall a famous poem of Bal Krishna sharma naveen.. phir kya hoga uske baad... here it is...<br />"Utsuk ho kar shishu ne puchha,<br />'Maa, kya hoga uske baad ?'<br /><br />Ravi se ujjval, shashi se sundar,<br />nav-kislay dal se komaltar<br />vadhu tumhare ghar aayegi<br />us vivaah utsav ke baad<br /><br />Pal bhar mukh par smiti rekha<br />khel gayi phir maa ne dekha<br />vadhu tumhare ghar aayegi<br />us vivaah utsav ke baad<br /><br />Phir nabh se nakshatra manohar<br />swarg lok se utar utar kar<br />tere shishu banne ko mere<br />ghar aayenge uske baad<br /><br />Mere naye khiloune lekar<br />chale na jaayein ve apne ghar<br />chintit ho kar uthha, kintu phir<br />puchha shishu ne uske baad ?<br /><br />Ab maa ka jee oob chuka thha<br />harsh shranti mein doob chuka thha<br />boli phir mai boodhi ho kar<br />mar jaoongi uske baad<br /><br />Ye sun kar bhar aaye lochan<br />kintu ponchh kar unhein usi kshan<br />sahaj kautuhal se phir shishu ne puchha,<br />maa kya hoga uske baad<br /><br />Kavi ko balak ne sikhlaya<br />sukh dukh hai pal bhar ki maya<br />hai anant tatwa ka prashna ye<br />phir kya hoga uske baad?"<br /><br />at the level of poetic sensiblity, you are quite above your contemporary... congratulation..कुमार पलाशhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04395975925949663661noreply@blogger.com